Hat and Fruits

I am trying to return to a transparent medium (gouache) with pen and ink again. And I'm also thinking of doing a series on women in hats engaged in all sorts of activities. This one can be a fruit vendor or a buyer still deciding whether to purchase watermelons, tomato-looking persimmons or mangoes or one of each. My daughter thinks the melons look like enlarged Easter eggs. My partner  glanced at this and just gave a non-committal "hmmmm." All comments point to the message: "Try and try again."